Talk:Brahm and Treat's huge mistake/@comment-24.224.100.208-20130929054823/@comment-3969350-20130930043353

Sorry to say this, but you did a poor job on your additions.

Since when do very young children to drive someone's car to a very far place like California?

And they are too young to book a hotel.

Also, they would already become well-behaved again before they're even 5 years old.

And you added a somewhat out of character moment in where Haidyn said a rude comment since the boys acted up at the restaurant.

The only saving grace is that you made the parents reveal a part of the very important lesson you introduced.

You can do better next time, I promise! ^_^